Vote the next story

Welcome to Chastity

#13: Welcome to Chastity

Welcome to Chastity
Written by:  SaburoX
Release date:  April 17, 2013

Code




Linkcode

 Tags:
Science
Description

Plot points come to a head in the grand finale of the Welcome to Chastity. It begins where the last left off as Mei, Rayya, and Gwen worth together to put an end to the rampage of Gwen’s otherworldly doppelganger. Gwen takes center stage in some respects, but every major character is prominent and has at least one shining moment to contribute to the action before all is said and done, as they work together to put a stop to this Anti-Gwen’s evil machinations in an explosive finale.

There’s plenty of action, romance, and comedy. And of course, there is an abundance of growing breasts to cap off the ending.

 

Official Publisher's Review

The final issue is fun, with good action and a lot of BE for our heroines. The plot comes to a close with all the major questions answered and a satisfying conclusion for the villain. It’s a good ending to the sprawling saga of Chastity, although there are a few little niggling problems with it. A lot of pertinent information about the villain (and how to beat her) is revealed only now at the very end of the story. Understandably, some of the “rules” of magic are never clearly established up until now, and the sudden revelations of how the plots get resolved are a little awkward in how conspicuous they are. This is more of a little problem- the bigger issue is that Mei, the main character of the piece, is a little sidelined in the conclusion, giving up a lot of screen time to the supporting cast.

The ending is still satisfying, and it leaves a little to be desired. The various plot threads and mysteries are all tied up, including the romance subplot. Maybe it’s just that the characters as so much fun that it’s hard to let go after all this time.

Nonetheless the issue balances action, plot, BE, and a sex scene. Any fans of Gwen, or even just of Breast Expansion, should be richly rewarded by the ending, and hopefully this won’t be the last we’ll see from this series or this writer.

Comments

Messages